Weakness Blog #1 : phyllis http://fifteen-to-twentyseven.blogspot.com/
Weakness number 6: The author uses blunt language and literal description to communicate with the reader.
Weakness Blog #2: Under the Oak http://alix2278.blogspot.com/
Weakness number 9: The mood set by this is formal straight forward attitude while also giving a sense of laid back and just telling of the story.
Weakness Blog #3: Apples to Apples http://wowfaktor.blogspot.com/
Weakness number 4: It holds an uncensored array of words that give you the perception that nothing matters and the main character doesn’t feel a necessity in explaining any factual minutiae about his parent’s past.
Weakness Blog #4: Fire side Reading! http://bookwormsfiresidereading.blogspot.com/
Weakness number 1: He displays the laziness in teenagers when he says, "I don't feel like going into it." He uses vulgar words like "crap," "hell," "damn," and "goddam."
Best Response: from InsideOut
http://inside-out-lily.blogspot.com/2011/10/pda-not-public-display-of-affection-its.html
"Baker elaborates on the mezzanine, the centerpiece of his novel, with a subtle passion, as he begins his journey to his office. He observes a "needly area of shine . . . [fall] against their brushed-steel side-panels" and the "long gloss highlights" waver on the black rubber handrails-- and he is amazed."
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